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Wednesday, June 27, 2018

persuasive writing

walt: edit and recraft our writing
these tram for writing we have persuasive dogs are better then cat we writing  something abut these like they are smart,good friendly and helpful. 


Mr Riceman dogs are better than cats.


They are smart because they follow instruction like sit, run and  catch .


They have brown eyes. The dogs have wiggly  tail. Dogs are funny because they make you laugh.


Dogs are good friend because they help you. They keep you safe from robber.


Dogs are helpful because they help the police. They help  to get the robber. Dogs help police by smelling the robber.


MR rice man you should get a dog because they are smart, good friend and helpful.

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